LyricalLesson Posted October 10, 2011 Share Posted October 10, 2011 (Chorus) Put your right hand high And throw it in the sky We rowdy in the club and we be at it all nite Ball it up in a fist And pump it just like this Leave your stress at home you know that ignorance is bliss (Verse 1) Ya boy is on a mission To get the world to listen Stop beefin' pay attention To the rhymes that I'm spittin' The music that I'm giftin' heavy, no I ain't trippin' Our focus needs some shiftin' No war, let's dance, get lifted Anger Hate Worry Pain Regret Shame None of that shit matters When this song is playing (Chorus) Ladies put your right hand high your right hand high put it in the sky and wave that right hand high Guys pump pump pump yo fist pump pump pump yo fist put yo hand up just like this and pump pump pump yo fist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reyna ♔ Posted October 10, 2011 Share Posted October 10, 2011 Hmmm...I'm really diggin' the sound of it. The instrumental is hot. I'm trying to understand the lyrics for sure though. Where are you coming from with them? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LyricalLesson Posted October 10, 2011 Author Share Posted October 10, 2011 Hmmm...I'm really diggin' the sound of it. The instrumental is hot. I'm trying to understand the lyrics for sure though. Where are you coming from with them? lol You are having the same issue with the song as I am. I think 2 messages are being conveyed here, and that's not what I'm trying to do...it's like I wrote lyrics from 2 seperate songs and tried to blend the parts I liked togeher...but it just isn't working. First, I wanted to reference the "fist pump" in a song, as a Jersey Shore nod lol. This instrumental just reaks of fist pump action to me Secondly, I wanted it to be a 'dance your cares away' type track...and then I tried to be socially concious at the same time. Classic case of too many ideas put together in one track I might try and re-write some new parts...but I'm about THIS close to scrapping it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reyna ♔ Posted October 10, 2011 Share Posted October 10, 2011 You are having the same issue with the song as I am. I think 2 messages are being conveyed here, and that's not what I'm trying to do...it's like I wrote lyrics from 2 seperate songs and tried to blend the parts I liked togeher...but it just isn't working. First, I wanted to reference the "fist pump" in a song, as a Jersey Shore nod lol. This instrumental just reaks of fist pump action to me Secondly, I wanted it to be a 'dance your cares away' type track...and then I tried to be socially concious at the same time. Classic case of too many ideas put together in one track I might try and re-write some new parts...but I'm about THIS close to scrapping it! Awww Yeah that's what it kinda sounded like. Hmmm, blending the two is possible. But it will take some serious work. it's hard to sound carefree while being serious at the same time. The fist pump idea is great, keep with that. But kind of have the message be unity or strength. Focus on an issue that you care about and roll with that. Remember, the instrumental can be fast-paced and upbeat even when the lyrics are strong. Rhythm Nation, State of the World, Jam, songs like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LyricalLesson Posted October 10, 2011 Author Share Posted October 10, 2011 Awww Yeah that's what it kinda sounded like. Hmmm, blending the two is possible. But it will take some serious work. it's hard to sound carefree while being serious at the same time. The fist pump idea is great, keep with that. But kind of have the message be unity or strength. Focus on an issue that you care about and roll with that. Remember, the instrumental can be fast-paced and upbeat even when the lyrics are strong. Rhythm Nation, State of the World, Jam, songs like that. EXACTLY! Perfect. Thank you, I'm definitely going to take your advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reyna ♔ Posted October 10, 2011 Share Posted October 10, 2011 EXACTLY! Perfect. Thank you, I'm definitely going to take your advice ! No problem, love. Best of luck with it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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