CalQuin Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 I never post stuff here because my stuff gets ignored, but oh well. I'm trying out a few different reels to start using since I'm getting back into comedy. So I need some feedback both positive and constructive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laveaux Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 i enjoyed that. I was entertained and amused. You have great annuciation and you look very comfortable on the stage. Your delivery is good although it does seem rushed sometimes, but I love that you are so animated. I laughed or giggled at most of your material, but the only joke I didnt get and it kinda fell flat imo was the one about the gun shooting you but not really shooting you. other than that, my voodoo spirit was lifted. kudos to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bu. Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 Haha I loved it! I was laughing throughout. Your voice really helps. I agree with Vu Du...you do seem to rush a little bit however I loved the shooting joke especially the start of it about you pretending you been shot . Other than that rush point I think you give solid performances Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
henrietta. Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 I really enjoyed it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LoveSupreme Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 That was pretty good. I'm in agreement with the others about your timing, but I love your energy and most of your jokes were funny. As far as the reel, the Janet love on the backing track is cool...but in some parts its a little distracting and hard to hear what you were saying over the music. Maybe lower the volume a hair or two. All in all, I think you did a good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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