LyricalLesson Posted October 24, 2011 Share Posted October 24, 2011 I added a neato rapid fire 4-bar rap verse toward the end of the song, and I DIG it Check it: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OaA21oGVm_g This is the original one, in addition to the rap verse I also recorded a full 2nd verse...but it turned out super cheesy The only part I like is the "that I am the shit" part (cuz it's true) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y6lzqbB6Jio Here's the lyrics if it tickles your fancy: (2ND VERSE) Ain't no man you've been with can do it like me J-J-Janet baby they can't love ya No not Rene, not El Debarge, or Jermaine Dupri You been wasting your time with these busters So now I'm happy girl, because you've realized That I am the shit See once I'm hittin' it you might pass out, yeah baby You know you gettin' it from someone that you won't forget (RAP) You're body's bangin' dammit I ain't gon' call you Janet I'm nasty so you Ms. Jackson I'ma make you high like Toni Braxton You pick the scene -- bed or the floor I pick from Strawberry or Damita Jo The way I do it is wicked I like to stick it and flip it slap it, tap it, get up in it And keep ya body lifted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reyna ♔ Posted October 24, 2011 Share Posted October 24, 2011 LOOOOOVVVVVEEEE the 2nd verse and the rap. :clapping: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatOtherFan Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 I LOVE it!!! :excited: It's so hot! I always love your work, and I especially love this because I'm one of the few fans that absolutely LOVE "Get It Out Me", and I loved what you added to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LyricalLesson Posted October 25, 2011 Author Share Posted October 25, 2011 Thanks you two, I appreciate the compliments! And I'm genuinely shocked that you liked the 2nd verse I just couldn't get it to sound the way I wanted it to. But I'm GLAD y'all liked it! I like the rap verse a lot, which is funny because I don't truly consider myself a rapper. TOF -- I LOVE "Get It Out Me" too, I think it was the most single worthy track on 20 Y.O., which I honestly look at as my favorite Janet Jackson album ( majorly contrary to the general consensus of the board ) I am planning on remixing more of Janet's tracks when I get inspiration thanks for listening to this one guys! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laveaux Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 that rap verse was pretty hot. love your voice , but im not feelin that Toni Braxton line since its a Janet song...just keepin it real boo. But overall nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LyricalLesson Posted October 25, 2011 Author Share Posted October 25, 2011 LOL, I feel you and I 100% respect the honesty I was running out of rhyming ideas Thank you for the love Voodoo and thanks for peeping the remix! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
switchblade330 Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 i FUCKIN HATE-HATE-HATE "get it out of me" !!!!! :& u sound good baby.............................but not w/dat song NEXXXXT TRAAAAACK !!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LyricalLesson Posted October 25, 2011 Author Share Posted October 25, 2011 :o Taking me out of the equation, which is fine btw -- you hate GIOM?! Wow, why?! I'm curious. I always loved it -- It's fun, funky, and energetic, and I love the throwback vibe it gives in the breakdown Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodienda76 Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 Im on my phone right now. I will listen to this when Iget home. I absolutely adore this song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xtraordinary Xternal Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 That was horrible I could have done better and will do better... You ran from our youtube sing off I challenge you right now dammit! sike that was nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodienda76 Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 i FUCKIN HATE-HATE-HATE "get it out of me" !!!!! :& u sound good baby.............................but not w/dat song NEXXXXT TRAAAAACK !!!!! HOW DARE YOU! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jodienda76 Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 Um It's fucking blocked!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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